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What makes people smokes ? what is the danger of somking ? how it can affect the person?. Smoking has became a serious problem people should consider, it has became more popular nowadays and people of all different ages are smoking , children are copying their parents or their Bad friends , they learn this bad habit instead of learning something useful , smoking indeed have many causes and effects that this essay will shows .
What makes people smokes ? what is the danger of somking ? how it can affect the person?. Smoking has became a serious problem people should consider, it has became more popular nowadays and people of all different ages are smoking , children are copying their parents or their Bad friends , they learn this bad habit instead of learning something useful , smoking indeed have many causes and effects that this essay will shows .
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The structure is generally OK, but lots of language and punctuation errors:
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2) what - C
3) somking - SP
4) no space between punctuation mark and the word before it
5) how - P
6) how it can affect the person?. - Word order and P
7) the person - # (only one smoker in the world?)
8) has became - T
9) Smoking .....will shows. This is one sentence. It should be many sentences
10) it has became - T
11) Bad - C
12) indeed - delete this word
13) many causes and effects - how many? be specific
14) will shows - T